Talk:The Desert Peach

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"This was mostly written by a German! --23:34, 18 August 2006 (UTC)Xenia L."

Khatru2 21:38, 4 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] major cleanup needed

I hope to get around to some of this soon:

  • NPOV! Much of this reads like a strongly positive review - I agree, but that's not what we're doing here. Too many jokes, too.
  • Copyediting. Looks like a first-draft translation.
  • Move character descriptions into a separate section, + general reorganization.
  • Add ISBN links for books.

←Hob 17:35, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

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