Talk:Terrence Kaufman
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[edit] Tidying up language and style of the article
Hello Maunus, I just came across this article and thought I could help by doing a bit of editing of the language (not the content). I also reordered a couple of adjacent sentences or paragraphs. This is just my attempt to help improve it, but they're just my suggetions really, so if you don't agree with anything and want to revert it I won't be at all offended.
I tried to tidy up the bibliography too but preferred not to touch some things (such as capitalization versus non-capitalization in titles); the same general comment holds there too.
When I tried to upload my revision I ran into an edit conflict. I think it was just a minor typo correction that I was overwriting (and had already taken care of in my version), so I went ahead and put in my version. If I have unwittingly over-written something of importance, I apologise. Cheers, --A R King 16:50, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Please go ahead. My articles always improve after being checked up by more tidy editors I am afraid :) Maunus 17:18, 19 November 2006 (UTC)