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Regarding "Most recently the Deep Space Network is going to be used to send to and receive signals from the Pluto probe":

There are two problems with this.

1) "Most recently ... is going to ..." is not sensible. Alternatives: Currently ... is being, or Currently ... is going to; Soon ... is going to, or Soon ... will; Most recently ... was used for

2) "send to and receive signals from the Pluto probe" is unnecessarily awkward and unparallel. I like: "send and receive signals to and from the Pluto probe"

67.21.48.122 18:38, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

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