Talk:Symphony No. 4 (Ives)

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This article (as of early August 2006) draws most of its information from the Charles Ives article. It may be considered plagiarism, so extensive revision is needed. A Wang (talk/contrb.) 18:04, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Hi, Andy. If you're saying the article draws from the Wiki article on Ives, I don't think that can be considered plagiarism. At most, the duplicated info at the main Ives article should be taken out, and a link to this article provided.
Phrases like, "considered his most remarkable completed orchestral piece" should either be made more objective and neutral, or a source given ("considered by so & so...", with citation). Since this is one of my favorite Ives pieces (I'm surprised it didn't have an article already) I'll do what I can to help improve the article, when I get the time. --Rizzleboffin 18:23, 5 August 2006 (UTC)
A belated thanks to Rizzleboffin for contributions. A Wang (talk/contrb.) 20:48, 12 August 2006 (UTC)
No problem, Andy, my pleasure. One thing-- I noticed the bit about the pianos being one solo and one orchestral piano, 4-hands was taken out. I thought that was a little unusual and worth mentioning in the instrumentation section. I do plan on adding more later, but I'm in the middle of a Korean movie project at the moment... Rizzleboffin 22:58, 12 August 2006 (UTC)