User talk:Sweepthelegnate
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[edit] Modular homes
I have looked over your edits and links added and feel you need to add better references and sources to this page and makes some way out claims without proper sources. I as well deleted the links till this can get cleaned up. One reference link is ok but you had 4 without really a good reference to anything.
Thanks for adding to the article but it needs some real help by you please retry and lets work together to get this article correct and verified. Thanks, --Cleanupman 18:30, 14 September 2006 (UTC)
- I fixed your references as they were done incorrectly, much better. I deleted some content as it was out of place.
I would suggest when writing do a sub compared to mobile homes and a sub for site built homes. To add content about mobile homes in one sentence and then site built homes in another is confusing.
I also deleted the labor part as this is conjecture and offensive to someone that might read it. I am sure there is as many if not more skilled laborers in site built homes than modular home builders use unskilled labor as well, so this is just not a good thing to say.
I would say the article is taking shape and can be continually improved as modular homes grow as you say. Thanks it is good to work together for the growth of this article and site.
- I have divided it up some but did it in a hurry so take a look at it and work with it ok I know it needs some and can be reworded if necessary.--Cleanupman 18:16, 15 September 2006 (UTC)
