Talk:Summerwind

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[edit] Serious rewrite needed.

Ignoring the obvious points of terrible spelling and grammar, whoever wrote the article has many inconsistencies with several accounts I've read, especially about Ginger's father - he was the one that came and picked up Ginger and her children and left Hinshaw there alone. He knew it was going to upset her that he wanted to purchase it.

Debate about that point should be scarce especially when you consider that the episode of A Haunting which featured the story was recounted by the family themselves.

Done
perfectblue 14:50, 27 October 2006 (UTC)

- Shipton

[edit] Tagged for clean-up

This article still needs a major cleanup. Phrases like 'eventful events' sound really dumb. Also this phrase 'They left the corpse there but if they had removed it, it would probably stop the supernatural events going on there.' smacks of original research. Could someone more knowledgable about this subject pitch in to help? The Kinslayer 15:13, 19 October 2006 (UTC)

It's not OR, Its a near direct quote from Ghosts of the Prairie.

perfectblue 14:48, 27 October 2006 (UTC)