Talk:Submarine 707R

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Discussions welcome. I'm putting in some stub info. I'll have to rewatch the 2 episodes to write the synopsis. Any one else have comments or additional info are welcome. -- Kschang77 19:59, 9 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Out of Universe

Hi. You asked for feedback on the anime project talk page, so here I am. As pointed out there, the primary focus on articles about fiction should be out of universe information. The in-unsiverse info should be there only to provide a background to the reader, so he knows what kind of work we're talking about. As an example, you could add in the lead: date of release, time taken for production, director, writer, producer, studio, theme and genre. You could have a section describing the different influences of the authors, and another one for the reception the public and the critics gave it. Your analysis of the tech aspects is good, even if not perfectly worded (if there are so many flaws, it is not as technically perfect as you say; and "sacrilege" is a personal point of view.) However, all these statements should be sourced to a reliable source to be admissible on wikipedia.

I hope I'm not being too hard. It can seem discouraging in the beginning, but it all adds up easily once you get yourself into it. Please don't hesitate to ask if you have questions or if you need help. My first advice would be to expand the article a bit more, and then start looking for sources. Keep up the good work!!--SidiLemine 17:58, 4 January 2007 (UTC)