User talk:Street walker/Michael Jackson test article

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  • Definitely looking a lot better. The article has been trimmed down nicely without losing any essential info.nice work.--King G 10:30, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments. I'm very glad you like it. However, I need more feedback before I can edit this into the main article. Street walker 10:55, 1 February 2006 (UTC)

My only suggestion would be to add a bit more info on his early life (i.e. the relationship with his father, siblings etc.), if you haven't already.--King G 12:15, 1 February 2006 (UTC)

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