Talk:Stroud Green Road

[edit] Style - like an advertisement

This article presently reads like a review or an advertisement by the tourism board. It would be useful if an editor familiar with the area could sort out facts and cut out any mentions of places not considered notable in the usual Wikipedia sense; also, there are several instances of peacock words ("peerless" and the like) that should be removed or replaced with more neutral wording. Lawikitejana 21:20, 8 October 2006 (UTC)

I agree. I know the area well - I'll see what I can do about this page. Marcus J Gilroy-Ware 06:50, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

I have edited the first paragraph, but the rest still needs doing. I will come back and do the rest in future. I think the reason it sounds a bit like a tourist guide is because there's not immediately obvious reason why it belongs in an encyclopedia. It sounds like the person who wrote it just added it because he or she liked it. I like it too but that isn't enough of a reason. London's a great city overall, but that's not why it's in the encyclopedia. I added the Ho Chi Minh reference as an example of the type of thing that may be helpful in grounding the article further. Marcus J Gilroy-Ware 07:12, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

Well, I've now had a go at full clean-up. I hope I haven't been too savage, but most of the individual businesses previously described just weren't notable. Comments welcome. Cmch83 12:45, 11 November 2006 (UTC)

I'll have a go at clean-up when I find the time (if I'm not beaten to it). I'd like to just check now - would anyone object to me deleting the current picture? As far as I can tell from either the article as it stands or my current knowledge, The Old Dairy is not notable, and the front-on picture of it provides no meaningful illustration of the nature of Stroud Green Road. Cmch83 15:48, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

I think it is notable because of the building. It is a listed building with panels illustrating the progress of milk from the cow to the consumer, in the 19th century. Unfortunately the photo doesn't show the panels.

I think perhaps if there is a picture of the Old Dairy, it should actually show the, which was the Friern Manor dairy farm in around the 1840s^{[citation needed]}, and because of the more general history of the area as a dairy farming one^{[citation needed]}. There should probably also be a more general picture of the street showing its dimensions etc. Next time I am there on a nice day, I'll take a picture of it. I'll find these citations next time I'm properly editing the page. Marcus J Gilroy-Ware 17:42, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

That would seem fair enough. However I should have added before that, of course, the Old Dairy isn't actually even on Stroud Green Road - it's over onto Crouch Hill, and I've just noticed that it's mentioned in the Crouch Hill article. You can argue that it's still associated in people's heads with Stroud Green Road, but I think this is a further argument against having a photo, or specific mention, in this article. Cmch83 12:49, 11 November 2006 (UTC)

I agree that it's inappropriate for the Old Dairy to feature prominently in this article when it's actually on Crouch Hill. I have added a photograph of the pub's exterior to the Crouch Hill article. Russ London 10:35, 6 December 2006 (UTC)

On that basis, as there's been no further objection, I've deleted the photo. If Marcus or anyone else could post a new photo that captures the essence of the road, that would seem great. Cmch83 18:16, 3 January 2007 (UTC)

The whole length of Stroud Green Road is the boundary between Islington to the south and Haringey to the north - the boundary only stops following the road once it's become Crouch Hill. This may have been different prior to the last time such boundaries were fiddled with, but I work for Haringey Council and there is a definitive, current map of the borough on my office wall! Cmch83 11:42, 11 November 2006 (UTC)

I have deleted the reference to a plan to open a railway station on the Stroud Green Rd. None of the history on the Northern Heights railway mentions a plan to open an additional station at Stroud Green Rd; if there is any evidence of a plan to open an additional station (which I very much doubt) a reference should be included. The Stroud Green Station was on the bridge near the Stapleton Hall Rd.