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An entry from Stan McCabe appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know? column on 5 November 2006.

Contents 1 GA on hold 1.1 Lead 1.2 "Early years" 1.3 "International debut" 1.4 "1935/36 South African tour" 1.5 "International farewell" 1.6 Images 1.7 Checklist

[edit] GA on hold

Not binding by any means, but in it's present state I'm not going to promote this to GA. Suggestions are as follows:-

[edit] Lead

• Where did he die? Please add it to the lead in the brackets
• "He was never dropped in his career" - dropped from what? The Test side? His local competition?
• Link "fast bowling" as appropriate
• Is there a list and description of cricket shots on Wikipedia? If so, "hook shot" needs a link
• "Medium pace" as two above

[edit] "Early years"

• Wikilink "barber" for context
• Is there an article on "all-rounder"s?
• "he was selected to represent New South Wales in his first-class debut against Queensland in the 1928-29 season" - one-dayers or Sheffield Shield? Specify and links needed

[edit] "International debut"

• See Tintin's note below.
• Second sentence is a little confusing - maybe use a ";" to break up the batting and bowling.
• Is it possible to add anything at all to the third sentence? It's very, very short...
• The fourth sentence could also be split up
• Wikilink not out (*) after 187
• "crushing" should be replaced and/or removed with a more neutral and less "flowery" term
• "he scored eight centuries on the tour, more than any of his team-mates - including 240" - specify that the 240 is an innings, as I had to reread it to understand (a quick transfer from number of centuries to an individual innings)

"McCabe made his breakthrough the following season in the Australian 1932-33, in the First Test in Sydney, the only Test which his parents witnessed in person, with England lead by Douglas Jardine employed the Bodyline bowling theory which involved constant intimidatory short-pitched leg-side bowling with a leg-cordon to catch balls fended off by the batsman, in an attempt to curtail Donald Bradman, universally regarded as the best batsman ever, from scoring. " should be split into three or four sentences. Tintin (talk) 08:24, 12 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] "1935/36 South African tour"

• A direct reference after the "chewing gum" bit should be added (rather than at the end of the sentence) - it's extraordinary
• "At the following Test in Johannesburg, Australia were set a record 399 to achieve victory on a turning wicket" specify in the second innings, find a link for turning that's appropriate
• With the name of this, isn't the MOS "1935-36" (rather than a slash)? You use dashes for the rest...
• Remove "remarkable" from the last sentence, redundant overexaggeration

[edit] "International farewell"

• Is there a link for the '38 Ashes tour? Will there be one? if there is/will, link to where it is/will be.
• "McCabe's most highly-rated innings came in the First Test at Trent Bridge." reference(s)? [2] and [3] will do, given what's in the rest of the paragraph.
• He finished with 232 in 235 minutes with 34 boundaries and one six, an innings in which Bradman summoned his players not to miss a ball, as "they would never see anything like it again." definately needs a source.
• "at just 28" maybe add "years of age"?
• "Curiously, none of his three most celebrated innings resulted in an Australian victory." - I would make it "Curiously, none of his three most celebrated innings - (### in place X during), (### in place Y during ), and his 232 at TB during '38 - and resulted in an Australian victory."
• Source for the ADF/WWII sentence?

[edit] Images

Please use {{PD-Australia}} for Image:Don Bradman and Stan McCabe.jpg. The location of the graph is bizarre - it should be moved (either put it below the header, or well above it).

[edit] Checklist

As of 10:04, 12 January 2007 (UTC):

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is well written.

   a (prose): b (structure): c (MoS): d (jargon):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (inline citations): c (reliable): d (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   a (fair representation): b (all significant views):

5. It is stable.

   

6. It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.

   a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA): c (non-free images have fair use rationales):

7. Overall:

   a Pass/Fail:

If you are concerned/opposed to one of my suggestions, respond underneath it using a double-bullet indent (**) and we'll discuss it :) Cheers, Daniel.Bryant ^{[ T · C ]} 08:57, 12 January 2007 (UTC)

I think I've addressed them hopefully. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 08:51, 17 January 2007 (UTC)

I'm happy enough. +GA :) Good work again Blnguyen. Daniel.Bryant ^{[ T · C ]} 09:16, 17 January 2007 (UTC)