Talk:Squirrel Boy
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Will anyone give this show a chance and actually watch —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Squirepants101 (talk • contribs).
-I watched a sneak peek and really liked it. The Squirrel's alot like what i've seen of Duckman.
-I wonder if that Andy is a reincarnation of Andy Dick or something... might be in the past... Coincedince?
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[edit] Squirrel Boy
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[edit] Cereal
What cereal is Captain Puffy the mascot for? I forgot the name of the cereal. ANSWER: Puffy Pirate Shirt Puffs!
[edit] Andy's Head
Why is it concave?! It rly bothers me for some reason.
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- Because it's a cartoon. Rzrscm 03:52, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
RE: The animators suck at drawing and every other thing. That's why.
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- And I assume you're better? Rzrscm 04:39, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Salty Mike
Everyone, STOP SAYING THAT SALTY MIKE IS CALLED "PEPPER JACK"! Rodney called him "Pepper Jack" ONCE! Sorry for the screaming, but PLEASE stop it. Rodney does not have a habbit of saying it. "Pepper Jack" was a joke because he was angry. Besides, it was Salty Mike's first episode. Rodney might have forgotten his real name. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.224.10.230 (talk) 02:26, 10 February 2007 (UTC).
[edit] Informal tone
The tone of this article needs to be improved. It has an informal tone that doesn't fit its role in an excyclopedia. The intro is good, but the character listing needs work. --Lendorien 00:35, 16 February 2007 (UTC)
