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Contents 1 Non-Playable 2 Box Art 3 Lots of incorrect information 4 Levels 5 Semi-automatic peer review 6 Release information

[edit] Non-Playable

It was recently added that there are non-playable characters that make cameo appearances. Whoever did this section of the article, can you please provide a source. Knuckles sonic8 19:33, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Box Art

Here you'll find the box art for the game:http://www.gamespot.com/wii/action/spongebobsquarepantscreaturesfromthekrustykrab/index.html

[edit] Lots of incorrect information

The Krusty Krab page currently contains a lot of factually incorrect, or just inaccurate information. Especially the overview of the levels which used to be accurate, but has now been replaced with information specific to the DS version, which is totally different to the PS2/GC/Wii version.

Unless anyone has any objections I'm going to overhaul it in the next few days. Theseus314 20:04, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

This game page needs a lot of work and editing to be done...Wouldn't be surprised if the above ended up happening. Knuckles sonic8 00:20, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Levels

Whoever had added in level progression thing, could you also add in either a spoiler warning or remove that section? Whichever would seem more appropiate Captain Drake Van Hellsing 07:07, 7 December 2006 (UTC)

This article is already limited in its information so I think the Level section should stay. Knuckles sonic8 20:10, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

Ah yes, thanks for the spoiler warning, seems better now Captain Drake Van Hellsing 20:28, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Semi-automatic peer review

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[edit] Release information

Currently reads: "This game is the first SpongeBob SquarePants game released on a seventh generation video game console, the Wii. The Xbox 360 had been available for a year prior to this release. Currently there is no game planned for the Xbox 360 or Playstation 3 platforms based on the series. However, this is not first Seventh Genaration Console in all for Spongebob. The first was The Yellow Avenger for the Nintendo DS and PlayStation Portable"

Isn't this a bit contradictory, and incomplete - it says it was the first Spongebob game released on a 7th gen console, then the following sentence says it wasn't. The game was released on the Wii, PS2 and DS, but there's no mention of the last two formats, or of dates, or territories. Surely the comments about Yellow Avenger and consoles it hasn't been realised on are a bit irrelevant roo, as the article is on a single game rather than the entire series?MetalMidget 15:19, 16 January 2007 (UTC)