Talk:Sonnet 116

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"Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 116” is wonderful poem..."

I gagged at that without reading any further. "Wonderful"? It didn't even have an "a" in there. This "commentary" section is very unencyclopedic. It feels as though some high school student just copy-pasted their night's homework in there. Can we get a clean-up on this please? -- Thesis4Eva cont. talk 08:38, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

I agree, there is little in the commentary section of interest, need to be rewritten in a more formal style, and not simply lifted off of another site