Talk:Slow dance

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This article was nominated for deletion on 17/4/2006. The result of the discussion was keep.

[edit] History Section Clarity

The history section contains the sentence In turn, rock and roll ironically because the ubiquitous dance genre of the 1960s. There in no proper verb in that sentence, and because of it I do not understand it or the sentence that comes after nearly coinciding with the rise of DJ-based dancefloors which rapidly displaced live bands. which oddly lacks a noun, joining the sentences doesn't clarify the meaning to any great degree. The original contributor has been banned from editing wikipedia (presumably for unrelated reasons) which makes determining the intent difficult. If anyone can clarify those sentences that would be quite beneficial to the article, otherwise removal of those sentences may be neccesary.

Antwerp42 03:57, 25 March 2007 (UTC)