Talk:Simultaneous release

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This page needs review by an editor with more experience than myself.

Prior to my edits, the second paragraph was a verbatim lift from a Fortune Magazine article. I rewrote that paragraph.

However, other parts of this page appear to be non-original.

For example, paragraph 7 ("Opponents of simultaneous release on other grounds include director M. Night Shyamalan..."), while now slightly tidied up by me, was previously taken directly from the Fortune article cited above. Unfortunately (excuse pun) the Fortune article uses only snippets of quotes from Shyamalan, and without access to the full source quotes, paraphrasing is difficult.

At the very least, better citation of references is needed on this page. I'd do it myself if I knew what the sources were. :)

Jack Garfield 00:23, 29 January 2007 (UTC)