Talk:Shuffle!

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1 Story Arc
2 Sex details
3 Sales figues
4 GA Passed

[edit] Story Arc

Section needs serious editing. I've ironed out a fair bit of it, but a lot more work needed before this article is polished enough to stand on its own --takagawa-kun 03:02, 3 December 2005 (UTC)

Been wanting to try out working with an article. This article has been getting way too messy and too big. Figured it was best to split each girl into their own respective articles for a more in-depth analysis and biography and clear up some room for the main one. - SoldierofDarkness -

I rewrote the article such that each character's story arc was given away as little possible in the main article (I also reorganized the sections hoping that this will avoid accidentally causing readers to have the anime spoiled for them). Added more to the individual articles of each character, but some of the minor cast still need some work. --Cless Alvein 06:25, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

This page really needs more from the game. Right now, the article is more of the anime, which is only one story arc, instead of the game as a whole. --RaptorFB

I think there should be different sections for the game and the anime. I mean, I read some of the character profiles from the article and they seem to not conencide with the game and more with the anime (because the translation hasn't been finished yet.) It may also be advisable to make three articles called Shuffle! (Game), Shuffle! (TV) and Shuffle! (Manga) and turn this page into a very general block of information then link to the other branches. --Zero

[edit] Sex details

I beg to differ the IP that removed the sex details. Considering it is an eroge (i.e. porn) it really kinda needs the details :/ I mean, it's the point of the game. Plus, I really only mentioned the things that apply for all characters, I didn't even get that into it. Final note: Wikipedia is not censored for minors. --SeizureDog 19:12, 25 September 2006 (UTC)

I'll second that motion. Or notion, rather. The section did not seem particularly non-NPOV and is pertinent to the 18禁 version of the game. Keep it there. However, I do want to bring up a side note... Shuffle! On the Stage was free of ecchi scenes altogether, showing that in this title and often in other galge as well that the writing stands well on its own; unfortunately that's a different discussion on its own that probably belongs more in an essay, and isn't particularly encyclopedic... (´∀｀　) Seikensha (talk • contribs) 06:16, 7 December 2006 (UTC).

True enough. I'm completely fascinated at how the Japanese actually have porn with plots capable of standing on their own. Certainly can't find that in American porn. Of course, not all eroges are like that, but still. --SeizureDog 15:25, 7 December 2006 (UTC)