Talk:Shayna Richardson

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This article was nominated for deletion on December 31, 2005. The result of the discussion was keep.

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I removed the picture with the tits. I liked it, of course, i just didn't think it was particularly relevant. Jaileer 20:25, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

Why was it not relevant? It showed Shayna Richardson skydiving with her instructor/boyfriend... isn't that exactly what this article is about? (although admittedly she's famous for an AFF jump rather than a tandem). I figured it would be the best shot available... --62.173.76.218 15:14, 23 March 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Needs to be more accessable

Note the bolded parts of this quote:

Her main chute opened properly but she unstowed a toggle by doing riser turns which caused her to start spinning out of control. This could have easily been fixed with a controlability check but instead at that point, Richardson cut her main chute and attempted to deploy her reserve chute, which didn't deploy completely.

These terms are unfamiliar to a general audience, and it would be good if somebody knowledgeable in sky diving could expand the article and explain them. -- MisterHand 01:21, 20 January 2006 (UTC)