Talk:Serenity (film)/to do

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A few thoughts for you guy's FA campaign

  • Expand for a three paragraph lead
  • Expand Production section if able
  • Compress Synopsis section more if able
  • Expand or divide one paragraph sections (minimum of two paragraphs)
  • Cite sources in influences section

Good luck. The Filmaker 21:27, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 22:53, 18 December 2006 (UTC)

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