Talk:Scott Erskine

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I'm not sure about something in this article. Does it say that a cotton swab was found in the mouth of the dead person? It seems more likely that a crime scene or autopsy technician would have swabbed the inside of his cheek. Also, further down, referring to a different case, that he was charged on one date, but not sentenced until this other date. Normally, there's activity between being charged and being sentenced, most notably, being convicted. It reads very strange as written, but I don't know all the facts of the case. I hope this doesn't sound too obtuse, but I found this article a little confusing.24.131.12.228 01:54, 19 November 2006 (UTC)