Talk:Saint Patrick's Cathedral, Karachi

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i posted the wikify note, but i think more important than the format and layout is the losing of the first person pov. as well the article sounds like a big vanity article to me as of now Benji64 02:07, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

I gave the article a makeover, though I didn't modify the quoted material beyond wikification (despite being almost one big run-on sentence). Although a gazetteer is referenced, it's done a bit informally. Good enough for the time being, I suppose. -- Hadal 02:44, 20 April 2006 (UTC)