Talk:Ruth Underwood

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I don't think anyone will argue that Ruth Underwood isn't a virtuoso, but this article reads like a fan club bio or profile. "Ruth went on to augment over 10 Zappa/Mothers recordings with her talents, dispatching marimba passages that would plunge most percussionists into despair with effortless grace and precision" could just as easily be written "Ruth went on to perform in over ten Zappa/Mothers recordings." Joseph N Hall 11:02, 30 August 2006 (UTC)

I tried to fix it, leaving just a single "impressive". Please have a look. David Sneek 20:36, 31 August 2006 (UTC)