Talk:Ron Dellums/Comments

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almost ready for GA - well sourced (which is better than most GAs), but it has a lot of choppy sentences that don't flow together well, plus too many single sentence paragraphs. Also, there's some funky code showing around "Arms Control" - plus the references need to be brought in line with WP:CITE-- use {{cite web}} so that you can get those in line...

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