Talk:River Dee Ferry Boat Disaster

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Shipwreck-related priority open tasks: To Do Shipwrecks Clean up typos Improve grammar Add any additions if needed Discuss desired additions Cattewater Wreck Needs expansion Done Shipwrecks Re-wrote the first paragraph Cleaned up Types of Shipwrecks it felt a bit jumbled Cattewater Wreck Started the article

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I've changed "As queues began to form on the Aberdeen side..." to merely "As queues began to form..." because my understanding (from an Aberdeen City Council reference book, which is cited in the main Torry article) was that the ferry was returning to Aberdeen, and I felt that the wording (loosely) implied the opposite. However, I've not gone so far as to state the opposite, preferring to leave out the information until it can be established whether the source is correct – there seeming to be some doubt because I presume the original author of this article drew their information from some other source. – Kieran T ^{(talk | contribs)} 00:20, 20 July 2006 (UTC)