Talk:Red Faction
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[edit] Storyline
The one thing that annoys me about this article is the sheer depth in which the storyline is described. I propose a condensed version of the story, detailing the key points, along with the "levels" of the game in the order they are discovered in the game.
I don't think it's necessary to tell the reader:
Eventually Parker makes his way via secret underwater caverns to Capek's undetected research facilities for nanotechnology
Perhaps a more simple approach will suffice:
- Garbage Processing Facility - Parker encounters an Ultor Personnel Suppression Combot which must be defeated by luring it into the incinerator.
- Medical Labs - Parker must use a disguise to compromise the heavily guarded laboratories.
- Capek's Zoo - It is revealed that Capek is using miners as guinea pigs for nanotechnology experiments.
- Capek's Inner Sanctum - Parker kills Capek.
- Grand Canyon - It is revealed that Colonel Masako has sent mercenaries to combat the rebellion.
- Satellite Control Tower - Parker sends an SOS message to the EDF fleet.
etc.
Any feedback? --Kryters 12:12, 4 March 2007 (UTC)