Talk:R.I.C.E.

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Wikifying I began to question the NPV of the article, it is a little advert-esque, ie. These RICE events are led by leaders from all over Sydney and create a great environment to hear the gospel.

Seems a little warm for description. Anyway what do wikipedians think?

I don't think it's a big deal just a need for more informative description rather than promotion. It could just be re-worded --Dananimal 01:08, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

I reworded the article a bit in an attempt at NPV - think it's ok now? AbsolutDan 05:40, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

Looks good now. Dan, the CowMan 00:00, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

Thanks - but, being more of a seasoned editor than I was 2 months ago, I can see now the tone of the article needs work too. I've tagged it as such. --AbsolutDan ^(talk) 00:51, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

I've taken a crack at cleaning up the tone. -- Whpq 18:27, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

Looks good to me --AbsolutDan ^(talk) 18:32, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

I have edited the article to include a criticisms section. I would like it to be more balanced, so it'd be good if someone could put something in the response to criticisms section, rather than just deleting my Criticisms.

More information has been added to the page to make it more interesting and readable. Criticisms were removed as the neutrality of all the points raised were questionable (and unhelpful). No official citiations were provided for any of the more direct criticisms.