Talk:Puhdys
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[edit] Ostrock in general
If anyone has any knowledge or interest in the subject of East German culture, and the rock music that is generally held to be its most representative element, please let me know, as there are still several other articles that need to be written. That's all, ProhibitOnions 12:07, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
- As you might recall I'm interested in it, but I know very little about East Germany, so I doubt that I could help very much, if at all. Tev 18:56, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
- Sure you can. Peer-review K...! for me. If it looks like something needs explaining, expanding, cutting down, or whatever, that woud certainly be help. And of course, you can fix any mistakes or tangled sentences you come across. Regards, ProhibitOnions (T) 20:48, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
- Will do! Tev 00:20, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
- Okay, I went through and did a quick edit. Didn't see a whole lot to change in there, quite honestly. You're a very good writer. The only major thing that I could think of is that, while fairly comprehensive, it still seems somewhat short. I don't really know if it's something that could even be expanded upon, but consider similar bands from the era such as King Crimson. Admittedly, they are an Western, English language group, and as such are likely to have more information availabe about them, which would increase article size.
- Anyways, that's about my only major comment upon the article, otherwise good job. For this article as well, particularly since you did this one, mostly, by yourself!
- Should you need any other peer-reviewing or anything, just drop me a line on my talk page. (By the by, I am the same user who requested this article to begin with, I've since changed my user name) Tev 04:34, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
- Belated thanks for that, and will do! Regards, ProhibitOnions (T) 12:25, 27 June 2006 (UTC)
- Will do! Tev 00:20, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
- Sure you can. Peer-review K...! for me. If it looks like something needs explaining, expanding, cutting down, or whatever, that woud certainly be help. And of course, you can fix any mistakes or tangled sentences you come across. Regards, ProhibitOnions (T) 20:48, 6 June 2006 (UTC)