Talk:Ptolemy of Mauretania/Comments

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This article is very poorly written. There are numerous run-on sentences as well as random bits of information inserted seemingly randomly at the ends of paragraphs of differing topics. There also seem to be a few points in the article that either have no reference or seem to be based on conjecture. At the very least, this article needs to be edited for grammar.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 141.199.248.2 (talk • contribs).

OK. Go ahead and edit it. We'd be glad to see whatever improvements you can make. Fan-1967 18:40, 24 January 2007 (UTC)