Talk:Potemkin village

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That judges bit still needs work to "flow" properly. Too many big words for the sake of big words and it breaks the paragraphs readability.

The sentence on the "Big Fish" means little without giving us some details about the story.

I've studied the 'judges bit', think I have understood it now, and have made it a bit clearer, hoping I didn't introduce any errors!Geke 08:55, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
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