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I've attempted to remove quite a bit of POV from the article (about X race being best for Y etc.) as well as cleaning up the repeated references to "you", but I'm not entirely sure how to reword some bits (such as "It (usually) takes a very experienced player to make good fleet combinations") without having references of someone saying that handy , as without them I'll just be deleting large chunks of the article. --Despair 22:07, 19 April 2006 (UTC)

I'll give the article some attention when I have more time, probably next week. Are you a player of the game by the way? - Dammit 22:48, 19 April 2006 (UTC)

Nope, staff on NetGamers (the IRC network that it primarily uses). I'm reasonably familiar with the basic Planetia concepts, but not some of the more fine details. --Despair 17:10, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

Well, seeing I wrote it on a free afternoon, there's bound to be some problems linguistically. Edit what you want, in the true wiki spirit. Just make sure you confirm your facts before doing so. - Stynx 20:20, 2nd of October 2006