Talk:Phantom Manor

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[edit] Article needs a thorough rewrite

Encyclopaedia articles cannot read like the insider's dialogue on a fan forum. It's a fascinating article, but it needs to sound less flowery and should not involve vague Disney terms.

Also, it cannot be written in a "we"-perspective. But most of all it needs more facts! Actual facts, not the facts the Imagineers want us to perceive as facts as we experience the ride. Tomsintown 23:11, 9 October 2006 (UTC)


[edit] Source?

This reads like a Babelfished copyvio. -- Cyrius|✎ 16:10, 24 August 2005 (UTC)

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