User talk:Perfectblue97/Horse ripping compared to cattle mutilation

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Might be worth you RFC'ing this draft article before adding it to the wiki.

One thing I'm not sure of is that it seems to come from nowhere. Theres no article on horse ripping, no article on cattle mutilation, so implicitly both these aren't that major... and yet there is an article comparing these two. Thats odd.

Might I suggest a slight improvement therefore... change the title to "Animal mutilation", and include in it a general discussion of mutilation (main motives, and types of damage), then a section on "horse ripping", one on cattle mutilation, and THEn one comparing the two. This would then make it a much more "solid" and broader topic and more likely to be of general interest to more readers. Good luck! FT2 ^{(Talk | email)} 12:47, 13 October 2006 (UTC)