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[edit] Hoysala architecture

This article has been through two rounds of copy edits and a spell check. This article is a new subject I am writing about. My previous major contributions were on the history of a few South Indian Empires, including Hoysala Empire. So I think this article will compliment well with the Empire that created the architecture (Hoysala Empire). I would like some positive feedback on content, format, prioritization of subheadings and any other architectural details that are deemed necessary. I believe I have covered the basics of all the important aspects of Hoysala architecture. ThanksDineshkannambadi 18:33, 31 January 2007 (UTC)

  • Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:05, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
Reply Thanks for the auto peer review. I will pay close attention to the points provided.Dineshkannambadi 02:46, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Comment "Hoysala architecture is the distinctive building style developed under the rule of the Hoysala Empire in Karnataka, India between the 11th and the 14th centuries" But Karnataka was not there as a state between 11th and 14th century.--Dwaipayan (talk) 18:17, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
Reply This has been addressed.thanks.Dineshkannambadi 03:18, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
Comment Just want to bring up this interesting issue. While the state Karnataka has existed since 1947, the land has been called "Karnata" or "Karnataka" for a very long time. Some 10th century Kannada literatures were Karnataka Kadambari on romance by Nagavarma I, Karnataka-Kalyanakaraka on medicine by Jagadalla Somanatha.Thanks.Dineshkannambadi 23:49, 7 February 2007 (UTC)

Looks good. A light copyedit may help. Submit it to FAC> =Nichalp «Talk»= 15:50, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

Thanks. Your comments are appreciated.Dineshkannambadi 16:51, 20 February 2007 (UTC)