Wikipedia:Peer review/Cold Feet

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[edit] Cold Feet

I've expanded this page from a stub, basing the section headings on the ones at The Wire and Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Much of the background information comes from the official series companion and behind-the-scenes specials from TV and I'd just like some feedback on anything else that needs to added (or taken away) so it can be nominated for GA. WindsorFan 13:35, 11 February 2007 (UTC)

• Howdy. Okay, I haven't had a proper look yet (I'll try and do so later) first things I can see that would need fixing are: some of the images lack a fair use rationale. Also the fair use rationale *must* be specific for that article (this is a thing the fair use police have been using to try and delete images), for example "== Fair use rationale for [[Cold Feet]] ==". Secondly, although I know these flags seem to be popping up all over TV articles is it really needed, personally I've not seen a great deal of value/usefulness in them. Lastly: The external link needs a bullet point and the NBC category should be removed (consensus at WikiProject TV is only the original channel (ITV in this case) or co-producers should have a category. thanks/Fenton, Matthew Lexic Dark 52278 Alpha 771 13:59, 11 February 2007 (UTC)

FU rationales now on all images, external link fixed and category removed. I've left the flags in as that is something which needs to be decided upon at WP:TV. Besides, once there is enough information about international broadcast, that section will be converted to prose and the only flag will be in the infobox.

I think you've done pretty well so far, sixty references :o. FUR needed on Image:Coldfeet.jpg, but you've done the other images. Can you convert overall spelling to British spelling, i.e. womanizer etc. The auto peer review tool says to put references after punctuations and to make sure dates etc adhere to the WP:MOS. I review GA's infrequently, and would be very inclined to pass it as it is. RHB ^{Talk - Edits} 13:57, 11 February 2007 (UTC)

Spelling converted from Oxford English to SBE.

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:51, 12 February 2007 (UTC)

Footnotes checked (all appear after punctuation), dates checked and wikilinked, lead as short as it can be.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by WindsorFan (talk • contribs) 17:47, February 24, 2007(UTC) (UTC)