Talk:Olivia Goldsmith/Comments

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Good work, but a few suggestions to help improve the page:

  • Article needs to state it's sources (as tagged)
  • Many of her books can be described as - can be, by whom?
  • a constant theme is the mistreatment of women by the men they love, but with the women coming out the winners in the end - original research?
  • Words such as 'Controversially' suggest an editorial bias.
  • Text would benifit from a copy edit eg.
  • She also wrote several - also to what? + Ceoil 00:13, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
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