Talk:Ocean Park Conservation Foundation Hong Kong

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suggestions on dividing the main content sections (starting from Conservation Efforts to Recent Actions) into following categories:

(4)Researches and Projects (5)Achievements (6)Education (7)Fund Raising Events

please comment. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 0101wukaman06 (talk • contribs) 13:58, October 24, 2006 (UTC)

Dear groupmates, i think there are too many contents about the part of "research and project" on our page. Do you agree with me? Can we do some changes and make this part clear and brief?—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 0101qianqian06 (talk • contribs) 22:50, October 31, 2006 (UTC)

I agree. I also feel that there are too many contents in the research& Project part. As Hannah mentioned in the tutorial class, we shall not add any more new things on our page. Instead, it is better for us to organize the structure of our page. I suggest that 1)we cut some useless information in the reaearch&project part or we just make a link to those research project. We do not need to write every detailed project. 2)We re-arrange the contents like this: background;->mission;->history;->organizational strucuture->Research/Projects/educational programs;->Recent actons->giving support->more info(including the annual report,contact)->reference

Does anyone have more suggestion?

        1. Sunny

How about combining background and mission? As we can see the information from the background is about threats and the reason why OPCF is established, but nothing have mentioned about OPCF, so if both are combined, things will become clearer.

Agree with sunny. Let us re-arrange the structure of our page.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 0101qianqian06 (talk • contribs) 12:50, November 1, 2006 (UTC)


the research and project part is really a bit clumsyand too detailed...may be we can cut out those very specific projects and keep only those general programmes like "research on dolphins"? chingkwan

Hey dear all, I've put the mission into the first part####sunny


I'm afraid the mission bacomes redundant then...so i'll go on to delete the "mission" section=P chingkwan

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