Talk:Numbers station
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[edit] For real?
is this for real?
- Sure. They're a little weird, but real, honest. The external links give pretty good introductions to the subject. --Camembert
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- Indeed, just got myself a new short wave radio, and I've already heard the Lincolnshire Poacher & the MOSSAD phonetic stations on them. James2001 17:55, 25 July 2005 (UTC)
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- Most definitely. I just got the Spanish Atención station yesterday using a Grundig YB400PE. I live on the east coast of the USA, so it comes in fairly well. Also heard MOSSAD's phonetic station once a little over a year ago with an old analog dial radio. I'd kill to get a clear transmission of Lincolnshire Poacher, far too much interference in my listening area. --Indigo 18:08, 29 July 2005 (UTC)
I can vouch for the fact that these are real. I heard the Czech one on a shortwave radio. A friend surmised that they were broadcasting lottery numbers, but the truth is far more intriguing.
The Czech word for "end" is "konec," pronounced "KO-nets." Russian uses the same word. I suppose that the person behind the Conet Project just misheard the Czech voice. Mwalcoff 03:53, 15 August 2005 (UTC)
- I was thinking the same thing, it kind of sounds like a usual (false) conspiracy theory. The article doesn't mention anything about such suspicions, mabye it should. Anyway, a friend just gave a sensible reason for why they wouldn't be very useful anymore. It goes basically like that today the easiest way would probably be using email or cell phone. If you are confident that you can hide in the massive information flow you wouldn't even need any fancy extra encryption. The only case where using number stations would be a good idea would probably be if they are watching you (reading your email, listening to you phone, ...). You would already be a useless spy (because they would probably not let you have any secret information) but it could possibly prevent you from getting caught. To summarize: They shouldn't exist anymore. At least not for spying purposes. Too bad. :-( Or possibly, if you assume you are bugged (but still getting information and is able to work as spies), you could possibly make use of it, but wouldn't there be an easier way?
- It's not a hard task for computers to search for suspicious communication, even from a massive flow of data. In certain countries this is done by humans. Emails and cell phone calls can be traced afterwards via telecommunications data retention. Using them also always ties you to third party services which may not be available during, say, a severe crisis. –Mysid 18:58, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
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- The stations are certainly real; not sure about the spying thing. I heard one of these several years ago in France; just a guy with an odd accent (not French or English) reading numbers out. I was fairly young at the time and just seeing what I could hear with an old radio, but it was so weird I remembered it clearly. I didn't know what it was until I read this wiki entry just now. As for the issue of whether such a thing would still be used, the methods of communication you mentioned are all traceable to the receiver (spy), whereas SW radio is only traceable to the transmitter (who is probably in a base abroad and cannot be arrested). Ben Morris 13:18, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
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- You can't really say this is a false conspiracy theory, when anyone with a shortwave radio can tune into them and see that it's not! Sprinkles 00:34, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Numbers stations to fake out one's enemies
Someone just added an assertion that some numbers stations (perhaps all?) are primarily to give the impression that a country has many spies. This is plausible on its face, if restricted to "some". However, I would like to see citations. I do not find any discussion of this kind of numbers station online.
The author then went on to assert that a numbers station believed to be Taiwanese has 5,000 codes for spies, despite the unlikelihood that Taiwan has so many overseas spies. For this I would especially like to see citations, because (a) one shouldn't be able to tell what part of a numbers station broadcast is a code identifying a particular spy, (b) Taiwan has a population of some 25 million, and in its precarious geopolitical position, has reason to have an active espionage agency, hence an assertion that they are unlikely to have as many as five thousand spies (0.02% of population) should be backed up with evidence; (c) I am more than usually suspicious of unsupported assertions involving Taiwan, again because of its precarious geopolitical and cultural position.
For the moment I have only corrected the author's spelling and grammar, but I am seriously considering deleting the entire paragraph.
Zack 00:14, 18 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- Agreed. I've moved it here for now, pending sources (follows below). If "many have argued", then this should be straightforward to demonstrate. We have to be very careful with this kind of topic, as a lot of things fly about as unsubstantiated rumour, and it's more difficult to get hold of solid, verifiable fact. — Matt Crypto 00:22, 18 Apr 2005 (UTC)
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- "Another possibility is that numbers stations are not primarily used to comunicate with spies, but to give foreign counter-intelligence officials the impression that a country has many more spies than it truly does. For example, a number station believed to be operated by Taiwan has about 5,000 different codes for spies, despite the unlikelihood that Taiwan has so many spies."
Swldxer 16:51, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Popular culture
Does the mysterious radio transmission in the TV series Lost count as a Numbers Station? -- AlastairR
Not sure, but it is certainly inspired by it. Cross-linking here could be healthy. Perhaps as part of a larger Numbers stations in the media section? -- Jon Dowland 19:25, 7 December 2005 (UTC)
The song "Where You'll Find Me Now" on the Neutral Milk Hotel album On Avery Island ends with what sounds exactly like a tune that comes from a numbers station. I can't find the tune on my Conet Project CDs, though, and can't find any references to it online. Anyone else heard this? I'd like to add it to the "Recordings and Music" section if I can confirm that it's a numbers station recording. Rjhatl 13:36, 28 November 2005 (UTC)
I just listened to the Neutral Milk Hotel clip and it is not a number station. It sounds like a distorted ice cream van tune instead. Swldxer 16:51, 27 September 2006 (UTC)
I'd like to propose that a new page be created for the Conet Project. JohnDouglasPorter 2006-02-02 20:15 UTC
- The Conet Project has now been created. I also added links to it in this and other articles currently referencing it. --FICT, 2 April 2006
[edit] Transmission technology
Now, I may just be an electrical engineer, but I take issue with this:
"Amplitude modulated, frequency agile Cplass-B (Push-Pull) modulated HF transmitters are the workhorses of numbers stations. Polyphase and PDM modulators were not used by numbers stations because energy costs were not an issue in the running of these stations."
First of all, class C amplifiers are used for transmission as they have tank circuits (inductors and capacitors) to broadcast RF radiation. Class B amps are simply push-pull amps (as correctly pointed out) but not designed for broadcasting. Furthermore, I have no idea what "frequency-agile" transmitter means. Not sure this bit about Polyphase or PDM is useful or relavent.
Anyhow, didn't want to change it without at least a little more consensus, but I am certain about the amplifier class business. -Muspud2 12/21/05
- Well I'm not an electrical engineer but you have my vote to change it. I dislike using jargon-heavy prose in a relatively unspecialised topic like this without at least linking to the relevant background articles. Also, given the relatively mysterious nature of numbers stations, such details about the amplifiers used would seem to be firmly in the realm of speculation, and hence should be denoted as such. Either that or some substantiation should be provided. -- AlastairR 00:46, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
I agree: delete "Class-B (Push-Pull) modulated". "Frequency agile" is accurate, but perhaps could be better stated. It means the transmitter is capable of being quickly tuned to another frequency, perhaps in another band. Maybe this was a bigger deal before solid state electronics. As for the "polyphase and PDM modulators" - not only does it sound like BS, but it seems unsupportable. How do you prove the non-existence of something? Maybe simply no one ever heard such a transmission. JohnDouglasPorter 2006-02-02 20:15 UTC [ 198.201.23.10 20:15, 02 Feb 2006 (UTC)]
- I'm a ham radio op with advanced licensed (same as extra class in the US), class b amplifiers are low tech but perfectly usable at high-frequency you just need transistors with a higher frequency response than you typical "class b" home stereo, but it's hardly this simple, even if you're not concerned about power usage you'll probably don't want to waste too much power because then cooling and max power dissipation of the transistor become the "bottleneck" of the power output of your transmitter (this is a very real problem at 100 kW) so class a-b in multiple stage are much more common, but "Class-B (Push-Pull) modulated" is wrong "Class-B (Push-Pull)" isn't a modulation type nor a modulator type so you'll need to rephrase that, by "polyphase and PDM modulators" the original poster probably meant either phase division multiplexing or phase modulation (both unrelated communications technologies you might want to link, but since this is generic radio tech and no one has dissected a numbers station who knows, it's likely they would use this but there's no documentation and wikipedia has a strick no original research policy, it's as relevant as saying that numbers stations use lightbulbs and chairs) btw class c amplifiers are no good for numbers stations unless they're morse because those amplifiers and a modulation baseband too narrow for voice. shodan wikipedia~at~domn~dot~net 11 april 2006 [ 72.0.198.207 11 Apr 2006 (UTC)]
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- I agree that "Class-B (Push-Pull) modulated" is wrong and that Class-B power output heat dissipation at 100KW is a serious issue. However, "too narrow for voice" isn't a problem when using Class-C with plate modulation, since the audio doesn't pass through the narrow RF stages. A more likely correct article statement is 'Amplitude modulated (AM) transmitters with optionally variable frequency, using Class-C power output stages and plate modulation, are the workhorses of international shortwave stations. Class-C has optimal efficiency for converting electric power into radio energy, which is no small matter in transmitters rated at half a million watts'. See a 500KW transmitter picture and specifications at http://www.transmitter.be/riz-or500k01a.html Milo 22:40, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
Further to this section, I couldn't understand the relevance of the DRM information. Reading it, it sounds like a speculation on what technology might be used to transmit numbers stations in the future, followed by a list of unimportant characteristics and finishing with a further speculation. Am I missing something? -- scwimbush 02:18, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
- I concur. I've been considering removing it since it was added. Honestly, I'm not sure this article needs a transmission technology section at all -- does it really add anything to speculate on just what sort of shortwave transmitter the (presumed) spy agencies are using? Zack 17:22, 25 March 2006 (UTC)
An alternative is to replace the irrelevant DRM material and describe why it or any high tech radio modulation ("polyphase and PDM modulators") doesn't fit with numbers station theory. Being caught with more than a civilian shortwave news radio is evidence of spying. Future numbers stations may be the last to use DRM, since future DRM radios will have an AM mode, and AM may penetrate slightly better under the worst conditions. The transmission technology section is useful in describing a black art, because it places known technical and economic boundaries on necessary speculations about what governments might do secretly. There are a modest number of big transmitters in the world, and they have tiny technical characteristics like fingerprints, which by comparison may suggest who built them and when. Milo 22:40, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
- The original piece, "Amplitude modulated, frequency agile Class-B (Push-Pull) modulated HF transmitters are the workhorses of numbers stations" was originally posted to the ENIGMA 2000 Group in August 2003.
- It was quickly removed from the Group.
- The poster of that message also posted other nonsense about the Polytone transmissions.
- Looking at his other postings it can be seen he was regurgitating others work, eventually posting stuff of which he had no knowledge.
- The polytone correcting piece - with reference - can be seen in ENIGMA 2000 Newsletter of Sept 2003 Issue 18 [Paul Beaumont, for ENIGMA 2000 Number Monitors Group] [ 155.198.203.13 55:25, 21 Apr 2006 (UTC)]
Well there seems to be a consensus here... the section sucks! (Interesting bit about the amplifier classes though, they didn't teach that in my design class!) So I think I'll just... I dunno, delete it? Mark it for deletion? Anyone more familiar with wikipedia policy should have a look at this and do it, I'm still a newbie at it. All I can do is write ;) --MUSpud2 04:14, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
- I have implemented most of these edits discussed above. Milo 09:24, 25 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Direction finding
Is it possible to locate the transmitters by direction finding? — Matt Crypto 18:01, 17 March 2006 (UTC)
- Please, if anyone knows all about this subject, kindly do add a section to the article about this. My understanding is that it's very hard to triangulate a shortwave radio signal, but I'm no expert, and this is just a recollection from the old Cecil Adams article on numbers stations. An obvious question most readers must be thinking is: Why don't they just find where the broadcasts are physically coming from, pounce on the station, and figure it out? Thanks in advance. Tempshill 18:17, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
- Having read a little more, it seems high-frequency direction finding was possible at least as early as World War II within the military (see Huff-Duff). — Matt Crypto 14:55, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
- Direction finding (DF) is so easy you can experimentally do it with an AM table radio. Triangulation requires a minimum of two DF locations and two pencil lines on a map. I'll add what I remember from a magazine article by a DF hobbyist who actually found a USA numbers station, though a citation is needed. These stations are physically guarded by governments so they can't be pounced on and figured out. Milo 02:57, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
- Sure, but you would be able to say which station is transmitted from which country. — Matt Crypto 06:38, 3 May 2006 (UTC)
- The problem with DFing is that a signal may not travel in a straight line from transmitter to receiver. You can see this with ghosting of a TV signal when the aerial is not pointed directly at the transmitter. It's worse at HF where the signal has usually bounced off the ionosphere and varies in amplitude and phase. The more ionospheric hops, the worse the distortion, and there are many reasons that the signal may not come along the great circle bearing, such as scatter and grey circle propagation. Joe VK4TU 203.25.140.98 07:27, 28 June 2006 (UTC)
- Sure, but you would be able to say which station is transmitted from which country. — Matt Crypto 06:38, 3 May 2006 (UTC)
- Direction finding (DF) is so easy you can experimentally do it with an AM table radio. Triangulation requires a minimum of two DF locations and two pencil lines on a map. I'll add what I remember from a magazine article by a DF hobbyist who actually found a USA numbers station, though a citation is needed. These stations are physically guarded by governments so they can't be pounced on and figured out. Milo 02:57, 2 May 2006 (UTC)
- Having read a little more, it seems high-frequency direction finding was possible at least as early as World War II within the military (see Huff-Duff). — Matt Crypto 14:55, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Phone numbers station?
I just heard about this on Off The Hook. Maybe someone who knows more about this sort of stuff should write a section on it. It's a new numbers station discovered operating from a phone line rather than on SW radio. The original post about it is here. [1] Ben Morris 13:28, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
- Interesting. But before it finds its way into the article I think it's better to wait awhile. It may be a joke of some kind – I ran some basic analysis on the transmission and it's not a strong cipher (i.e. not a one-time pad cipher), contrary to what one would expect from a regular numbers station. –Mysid(t) 15:06, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
- I've done my own summary of this phone number station, including all of the available facts I've been able to find. It's not much, and I didn't get very far on the encrypted message, either. Wired reporter Ryan Singel thinks it's a prank. --Error28 02:13, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
- There's now a second phone numbers station operating. --Error28 19:05, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
- Here is the the link(and number)[2][3] a supposed Men in Black/Mothman phone number located in Point Pleasant WV. I called it a few times and it asked for numbers to be entered. Can these be included in the article?Drazil91 17:05, 23 October 2006 (UTC)
This is [4]. I had forgotten where I learned about it, but after a few days of searching and asking folks at UnFiction, we figured out the "Phone Numbers Station" was Project Evil. Pyrogen 20:15, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Re-listening illegal in UK
Listening is illegal in the UK, however it's nothing to do with espionage, nor is it limited to numbers stations. It's simply that, without appropriate permission, it is illegal to listen to any radio station in the UK. Since it is likely to be impossible to get permission to listen to these stations, then it's an offence. It's covered by s5 Wireless Telegraphy Act 1949. Out of interest, the public have been given blanket permission to listen to stations that are actually intended for broadcast!
Citation amended accordingly BaseTurnComplete 10:44, 2 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Illegal Listening in Great Britain - another view:
The now obsolete Radiocommunications Agency produced a interesting document, RA169, which adequately illustrated the type of Radio Stations that can be monitored.
See: [5]
The above stated URL will take you to the last revised issue - which takes into consideration the Regulation of Investigatory Powers Act 2000.
See: [6]
The 'Regulation of Investigatory Powers Act 2000' defines those who can and cannot listen to things other than 'general broadcasts' and gives notice of those who can authorise certain persons to listen to other transmissions. It is a most powerful piece of legislation and removes any misunderstanding concerning interceptions.
However, it is not just the Wireless Telegraphy Act 1949 as amended, nor the Regulation of Investigatory Powers Act 2000 that the Short Wave Listener or Number Station Monitor should be aware of, especially if they intend to publish logs to do with British Communications.
Whilst DA Notices are generally aimed at the media the scope is such as to be of interest to those who offer logs or perhaps publish details of British Communications:
See: [7]
Whilst it is unlikely that any British Number Station Monitor is likely to be immediately arrested, it does pay to know what legislation exists. With the content of DA Notices [3 & 5] in mind one should be aware of the ever present Official Secrets Act 1989 [replaces S2 OSA 1911] and the way it could affect those members of the public who have intercepted Official messages. [Which, of course, HM Government might not readily tolerate given todays' world].
See: [8]
[Paul Beaumont for ENIGMA 2000 Number Monitors Group [9]
- Actually I'm very doubtful that the UK government (nowadays anyway) would give a damn about people listening to their number stations. The whole concept means it doesn't matter. Besides that, the people they would want to worry about would not be UK residents but the local agents of target countries (located in these countries). These are the one's who would be most risky (altho again, the whole concept nowadays is that it doesn't matter that people know what they're for or that they may try to decode them. They can't.) Instead, I suspect what the UK government would be concerned about is people listening to non-UK stations. I.E. foreign agents (illegals according to this article). It's these kind of people that they would be worried about and assuming they lack the evidence to prosecute them for espionage and presuming they can't continue to monitor such people for whatever reason, they may very well use this law to go after said people. Nil Einne 12:12, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Transmitter power
[2006-06-18 article:] "Since numbers station broadcasts would typically require higher wattage electricity than is available to households"
What is the basis for this statement? An HF signal can circle the globe on less than 40 watts - Mark, N4JMT [ Jmturner 15:11, 18 June 2006 (UTC) [10] ]
- The context of the article statement is a refutation that drug smugglers would be likely to use numbers stations, which gets into proving a negative. (Note, "households" really should become "third-world ranches, farms, or plantations".) But for now let's apply your technical question to government numbers stations. ≈ The 40 watt figure you cite was probably logged under ideal conditions of frequency band, local RF noise level, weather, season, sunspots, big receiving antenna, and a superb receiver, not to mention spending many hours in a comfy chair to reliably log a weak signal. To the contrary, spies have to work under all local conditions in all seasons and sunspot years. We know from the Cuban Atención Wasp Network and the East German My Spy Story numbers station cases, that spies have to work with available hand held receivers, sometimes under pressured conditions. Only really big transmitters are guaranteed to get through to nearly any basement-dwelling spy, nearly any place on earth, nearly all of the time. Milo 22:09, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Spelling check.
I noticed that there is spelling problem in this article. The spelling was Probalmatic. But Some editor changed the spelling. Probalmatic into Problammatic'. Does anyone know which one is correct spelling? Thanks. *~Daniel~* ☎ 03:14, 6 August 2006 (UTC)
- Exactly where is that spelling error? The "Transmission technology" section says "–making good HF direction problematic" which is the correct spelling. –Mysid(t) 14:33, 6 August 2006 (UTC)
- As I said above yesterday, I was confused with Problammatic and Probalmatic. That's what I asked for. *~Daniel~* ☎ 23:23, 6 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Revolution No. 9
Very intriguing article. I remember briefly hearing these stations in the past and assuming they were some sort of test transmission - it's interesting to know that the truth may be somewhat stranger!
After listening to some of the recordings on Conet, I can't help but be reminded of Revolution 9, the "song" on the Beatles' White Album which consists of the repeated phrase "number 9", "number 9" against a backdrop of strange sounds and weird music (including music played backwards).
I have to wonder whether John and/or Yoko were inspired by these stations, or if they incorporated number station recordings into their bizarre musical collages. Having said that, some of the stations (Swedish Rhapsody?) sound weirder than anything those two ever came up with! 217.34.39.123 09:32, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
- According to a definitive web site Revolution Number 9 Lyrics and Audio "number nine" was "taken from an EMI test tape" containing a series of spoken numbers. This number would normally be dubbed prior to the beginning of a track "indicating a recording of the ninth take of a song." The "avante-gard" artistic rivalry struggle by Paul to exclude John's Revolution Number 9 from the White Album was a harbinger of the breakup of the Beatles. Milo 14:33, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Proposed merge from Letter beacon
Proposing that Letter beacon be merged into this article, assuming it can be reliably sourced.--Rosicrucian 19:42, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
- Letter beacons aren't just numbers stations with letters; they serve a conceptually different purpose for encyclopedic classification. Radio beacons are transmitters, not radio stations in the formal sense. Stations usually transmit a signal of new data. Beacons always transmit the same thing, which in communications theory is a sign (as in a stop sign), not a signal. It's analogous to the difference between lighthouses and fire/flag signaling towers.
- Granted that mystery beacons are usually reported by numbers station monitoring groups, but Numbers station is a popular article by standards of distribution. Do we really want to change the name to accomodate letter beacons? Article size seems not an issue. Numbers station is currently 24K, and Letter beacon is only 1.5k.
- How would Letter beacon be helped by merging? Milo 07:36, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
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- It was initially proposed by another user, so I was largely doing the formalities. Your clarification does help though, and I think that was some of the trouble we had when we stumbled upon the Letter beacon article. We're not shortwave enthusiasts, and we weren't sure where to start to source an article that at present seems to be OR, and as such we didn't know the distinction between the two terms. If we can get that distinction made in the article itself, as well as some help on the sourcing, there should be no need to merge.--Rosicrucian 14:54, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Oppose merge. The distinction between the terms should be obvious, even to non-shortwave enthusiasts (I'm also not a shortwave enthusiast), simply from reading both articles. A numbers station typically transmits groups of apparently random numbers, read usually by what seem to be recorded voices, at what appear to be scheduled times. A letter beacon transmits a single letter of Morse code continuously. After the upcoming U.S. Thanksgiving holiday, I may be able to source at least some of the information at Letter beacon (I have a book from the 1980s that documents both types of broadcast; we'll see how RS it is). --Tkynerd 21:28, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Oppose merge also. Letter beacons are assumed to be radio navigation aids and therefore are maintained for either secret military or legitimate civilian purposes. With a few exceptions the letters only serve to identify the station. Numbers stations are (most likely) assumed to be used by governments for clandestine communication to secret agents and the numbers (and letters) they broadcast usually contain the message. The two are very different beasts.BaseTurnComplete 15:03, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Oppose for the reasons listed above. A numbers station is transmitting varied data (the number streams) at specific times. A Letter Beacon just transmits one letter, over and over again. Pyrogen 20:17, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Oppose. Two totally different things. While there might be some aesthetic overlap between the two, each certainly deserves its own article. Tzaquiel 18:52, 4 December 2006 (UTC)
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- Oppose. They Are totally different topics they should remain just how they are now. DO NOT Merge these 2 articles togther they are NOT Related. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.9.60.72 (talk) 03:01, 12 December 2006 (UTC).
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It seems there is unanimous consensus not to merge, even among the proposers, so I'll remove the propose merge article tag. If Rosicrucian and other Letter beacon editors need technical assistance, I think they are welcome to post a request here for editors to help over there. Hopefully Tkynerd has already done that. Milo 21:50, 12 December 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Overview: Dead Link
The link for Introduction to Voice Numbers Stations, http://filebox.vt.edu/users/tmays/classdocs/Final%20Project.doc requires a username and password to log in. For the general public, this link is effectively dead. There is no Google Cache for this document. While Tim Mays's intention in 2005 is laudable, the information he made publicly available needs to be moved to an accessible website, or this link dropped. Jedwards05 00:18, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
- It was quote of Smolinski, IIRC, basically mentioning Warrenton, VA. You could write to Mays at the email he provides higher up in that directory and ask for suggestions, including how to contact Smolinski.
- A better approach is to extract the (IIRC) five CIA numbers stations history from the Enigma 2000 archives, which would include both the Florida and Warrenton site stations, and blend that in to the existing paragaph.
- Meanwhile the link could be moved to a footnote. Wikiguides call for keeping the link stored somewhere even though stale, as proof that it was once sourced . Milo 13:07, 30 December 2006 (UTC)
- Done — link marked as needing a password and moved to footnote. Milo 10:53, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Tone?
User:Takeel just placed a {{tone}} tag on this article. I am curious as to what specifically Takeel objects to, as I don't really see that there are problems with the tone of this article. What do others think? --Tkynerd 18:15, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
- Hehe, it's a mystery for armchair spooks. Have a look at Takeel's Contributions. Anyone see matching patterns? Milo 10:40, 19 January 2007 (UTC)
As for the "tone", I spent a lot of time and trouble on the interference + jamming sections, which I wrote from scratch, then somebody comes along and says it's not good enough. You write the next section then Pal ;-) Simon Mason.
- In Takeel's edit summaries, he has complained about rumors and a technology section in other articles. This article discusses both of those things, but maybe they're unrelated to the informality tone tag.
- I think the tone is mostly formal. I did spot these sentences:
- If 'you' change those 'you's' to third person, then I guess it will be ok for 'you' to remove the tone tag. :) Milo 10:53, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
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- I feel that the word mysterious in the indtroduction gives an informal feel from the start. If we would pick a less emotive word it could change the tone of the article. On the otherhand that is what they are: mysterious. GB 22:46, 6 February 2007 (UTC)
- I'm disappointed by these changes in the mood-setting intro for several reasons.
- • First, this article is popular in large part because it is about a mystery. (In the golden age of radio there was a show titled, I Love A Mystery.) I recall the chills down my spine when I first heard a numbers station. That emotional reaction is publicly captured in the discussion at Alien Hub. Part of the article's encyclopedic flow of satisfaction is the way it establishes a mystery, transports the reader to some illumination, yet penultimately halts at the governments' stonewall. It follows the showbiz dictum of leaving the audience wanting more, which they can get by following the outstanding selection of external links. (If It Had Not Been For 15 Minutes is as good as TV spy fiction.)
- • Second, removing "mysterious" is a fix in the wrong direction, as suggested by the "tone" complaint. While I respect that Graeme feels the way that he feels, most people don't respond that way. In both writing and life, mystery increases formality (a metaphorical distance) because it is the opposite of familiarity (a closeness). Whatever Takeel may have intended, the tone tag is technically a complaint of excessive familiarity in writing, which is why I suggested removing the overly-familiar 'you's.
- • Third, changing male/female to men/women also increases familiarity. Since these are (usually) mechanical voices nowdays, and not real men or women speaking, then male/female is also rhetorically more correct. Milo 06:14, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
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- First, "mysterious" is POV and not encyclopedically formal, and was properly removed. Mood-setting is not the job of an encyclopedia.
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- Second, I changed "male/female" to "men/women" because a third category was also involved, namely "children." Children are also either male or female, so the contrast "male - female - children" is simply inaccurate. If you would like to change "men" and "women" to "adult male" and "adult female" respectively, I wouldn't argue, but I don't see a problem with the current wording, which I don't think "increases familiarity" -- it's not as if I'd written "guys" and "gals," for heaven's sake. --Tkynerd 13:43, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
I think the tone is good now, so I am going to remove the tone alert from the article. I have also given a B rating - what's there is good enough, but we need some pictures, and an infobox, possibly some tables such as a list of stations. With this added I think it could get an "A" GB 05:06, 17 February 2007 (UTC)