User talk:Nicowiki

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Please do not add commercial links (or links to your own private websites) to Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a vehicle for advertising or a mere collection of external links. You are, however, encouraged to add content instead of links to the encyclopedia as we drive for print or DVD publication; see the welcome page to learn more. Thanks. Obli (Talk)? 11:44, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

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Sorry, I was using a template to send you that message, so it may not have been enirely appropriate.

Anyways, what made me look at it as advertising it that the article reads as a sales pitch (phrases like "Few other systems can offer this much power" or "and it doesn’t stop there"), if you could trim it down to having a tone with a Neutral point of view, I'm sure no one would have any problem with it.

You might also want to have a look at The manual of style on how to properly format your articles like other articles on Wikipedia.

Happy editing! Obli (Talk)? 13:14, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

PS: Oh, and about articles on companies and their products - guidelines on whether they should exist or not can be found on WP:CORP Obli (Talk)? 13:18, 1 March 2006 (UTC)

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