Talk:National Fluid Power Association

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This page needs work to comply with Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy. The major contributor seems to be from the organization, and the tone is advertorial. If anyone knowledgeable can clean it up a bit, please do so. moink 01:39, 2 March 2006 (UTC)

I have been involved in NFPA for over a year and have tried to clean up the text to remain as neutral as possible. It looks like the text was just modified from their "About Us" page on their website. --65.30.208.167

Still looks like advertorial to me. If it doesn't have anything people can't get at their website, what's the point of this page? Wikipedia is not a directory. --24.143.132.148 19:41, 10 April 2006 (UTC)