Talk:Mission Mountain School

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This article seems to be written as a critique of the Mission Mountain School, not as a neutral description of the school. Please see Wikipedia:Neutral_Point_of_View for clarification on writing neutral point of view articles. It also needs to be copyedited and wikified. Crunch 03:34, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

• I quite agree, and I think 6 months is sufficient time to rectify the issue. I am going to remove all the unsources critiques and turn this into a neutral (albeit much shorter) article. --cholmes75 (chit chat) 19:53, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Removed NPOV content

ChinadogDebates are described, represented, and characterized, but not engaged in, this has been done. Background is provided on who believes what and why... although I believe the alumni viewpoint could use some work, that is elaboration on child labor and work (as in the instance where kids did the work of the school to become accredited, what that accredidation actually means- not mental health related, the absence of accredidation by health care orgs,etc- with proper citations, of course) etc etc etc... please explain in what way you find these edits in error and explain your continuous deletion of text. As you may be aware, presenting the facts means that this is not a place for the sole use of advertising a product.CAFETY 22:52, 26 January 2006 (UTC)