Talk:Michele Greco/Comments

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Have rated start, though with a little work it could easily be upgraded to 'B':

  • Lacks inline citations.
  • Lead is not an adequate summary of text per WP:LEAD
  • Needs a copy edit:
"Michele Greco was part of the powerful Mafia family that ruled both in Ciaculli and Croceverde – Giardini, two suburbs close to Palermo" - What/where is Giardini?
"Michele Greco had good relations with politicians" - No need for first name.
"The estate was also used as a refuge for mafiosi on the run and to set up a heroin laboratory" - instert a comma after 'run'.

These are illustrative examples only, entire text needs work. + Ceoil 00:37, 28 December 2006 (UTC)

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