User talk:Master Thief-117

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[edit] Abdominal Thrusts

Your 1 September edit to the Abdominal Thrusts article is entirely in the second person. This is inconsistant with the rest of the article and generally inappropriate for an encyclopedic article. Would you please rework that paragraph to put it in the less personal third person? Pzavon 16:41, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

You said on my User Talk page that your edits to Abdominal Thrusts make it a lot eaier to read when it brings the reader into the writing. That may be true in general, but this is an encyclopedia where a neutral point of view is a major goal. Writing in the second person is not usually appropriate for that and, in my opinion, this is not one of those exceptional times. I've not had time to go back and change it to third person. I would like to see you give it a try, but I will do it if I get the time. Pzavon 17:08, 27 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Freakazoid! vandalism

Welcome to Wikipedia. We invite everyone to contribute constructively to our encyclopedia. Take a look at the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing. However, unconstructive edits, such as those you made to Freakazoid!, are considered vandalism and immediately reverted. If you continue in this manner you may be blocked from editing without further warning. Please stop, and consider improving rather than damaging the work of others. Thank you. -- Jay Maynard 00:42, 19 January 2007 (UTC)

Removing vandalism warnings is itself considered vandalism, and will likely result in faster and longer blocks should they be deemed necessary. -- Jay Maynard 16:07, 19 February 2007 (UTC)