Talk:Marcus Choleva

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This article (a) reads poorly in English and (b) despite its description of Choleva's background, smacks of anti-semitism in its envious treatment of his salary. Rather unfair, in my view!

I have fixed much of the article, and removed some things to avoid misunderstandings and subjectivity. Bennyman 00:49, 21 January 2007 (UTC)