Talk:Magazine (band)

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[edit] Clarity & dates

This article needs some editing, correcting the POV use of seasons ("fall", "summer") which are hemisphere specific. Also some language could be clearer i.e. "shards of keyboards" perhaps should be simply "keyboards" or "dischordant keyboards" or similar. Design 11:48, 13 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Copyright violation

All but the last paragraph of the "Biography" section of this article was a direct copyright violation of [1] so I've removed it. I'm going to try to work up a non-violating bio of the band to replace it. Gwernol 10:39, 13 June 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Biography assessment rating comment

The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. Please feel free to put any comments or ask any questions on my talk page. -- GDon4t0 (talk to me...)