Talk:LSRfm.com

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[edit] noncompliant

Please do not put editorial comments in the encyclopedia, or facts you "made up". This entry needs attention to make its point of view neutral and to remove the chatty style. Wikipedia is not free webhosting, it is an encyclopedia. You need to clean this article up to remove these problems, or it will likely be drastically cut back to what is appropriate: facts and history only. cmh 19:10, 15 March 2006 (UTC)

The article is much improved, and while I still have some style concerns I think that the non-compliant tag can be removed. Regarding style, I think primarily the article would be improved if the shows were grouped as a list under a single heading. We don't need a heading just for an external link. Two lists, a shows list and a podcasts list are probably best. The article also suffers from a lack of copy editing... a close reading for capitalization and sentence structure are in order. cmh 16:15, 20 March 2006 (UTC)