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[edit] Needs cleanup

The whole thing looks like it was thrown together by a 2nd grader in 5 minutes. Someone should really clean this up. Wizrdwarts 22:27, 11 April 2006 (UTC) I looked through the whole thing, and it's also chock-full of vandalism, I removed some of it. Wizrdwarts 23:02, 11 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] June 7th

I was born on June 7th, so I must share my birthday with Slinkman. That's cool! 71.111.215.224 00:01, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

I Was born on the same date as spongobob, July 14!

[edit] Removed Junk

Took out this notice at the bottom - that's what talk pages are for.

=== To The Person Who Was Editing This Article === Mainly not all of them. But to this person, learn how to [[spell]] and punctuate correctly. It is very irritating to the other editors and readers when they have to fix your mistakes. Please read the whole article before editing it.

Also, I took out a bunch of references to erotic fanfiction, that does not belong here at all. Craig Sniffen 17:24, 1 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

I was able to clean up part of the page with the Camp Lazlo characters and places on it. The writer of the page or someone else might have to do the rest. User:QuagmireBlahBlahBlah 08:15, July 2 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Campers' Names

Why are some Wikipedians changing the names of the campers and are some of the names true? Squirepants101 21:04, 25 August 2006 (UTC)

Hey. Can you add screen caps of all the Acorn Flats scouts? Joanna, 14 September 2006, 21:33 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't get any screenshots because I don't have a camera. Squirepants101 21:01, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

There is another camper i saw in one of the episodes it looked like a persian cat. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by LongBay (talkcontribs).

There may have been a cat there, but where did you get its name? Did you make it up or was it in a real episode? Squirepants101 11:39, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

And by the way, please sign your comments with four tildes (~). Squirepants101 11:40, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Squirrel Scouts

Hey. Can you add screen caps of all the Acorn Flats scouts? Joanna, 15 Sep 2006, 18:17 (UTC)

[edit] Cruft?

I think some of this is starting to look like cruft, like "she hates Norman." Come on, the Squirrel Scouts don't appear in a lot of episodes. Squirepants101 16:58, 17 September 2006 (UTC) Also, I'm a little skeptical about Candi Milo and Grey DeLisle working on this show because in the credits I've seen, their names weren't listed. Squirepants101 16:59, 17 September 2006 (UTC)

Squirepants101. Which names have the grey squirrel, the purple mouse and the light green tapir from Acorn Flats?

Well, actually, the characters have no name and not mentioned. So it's unknown.--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:21, 24 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Toodie?

According to Lazlo Loves a Parade (could be seen online), Toodie is a squirrel, but this article claims that she's a rabbit. Squirepants101 20:52, 22 September 2006 (UTC)

Well, I think it was mentioned that in Love Sick, it was mentioned her name was Tootie. So, she is the squirrel. Who put rabbit?--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 03:07, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

The rabbit is Amber

Well, which name has the purple poodle? Joanna

Hey! Is there true, that a poodle's name is Misty and a tapir's name's Sue? Joanna

Why are you adding those characters if you don't know if they're real or not? This isn't a fansite. Squirepants101 15:40, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Rainbow Beak

The other day I saw a character on this page named Rainbow Beak The toucan. There is no toucan! At Least someone got rid of it. ~LongBay~

[edit] Tapir Scout, Poodle Scout and Gopher scout from Acorn Flats

Does everybody know which names have Tapir Scout, Poodle Scout and Gopher scout from Acorn Flats? Joanna bye the way the tapirs name is terrifield the poodles name is suzy and the peary dog name is michelle ok ..georgina..

[edit] Bill

Why can't I get to the Bill the aardvark article i made? Is Bill really a aardvark? What happen to the article about Bill? Bill was made article by me.-User:Kongsaurus12

Was Bill's article deleted or not?

I don't understand what happen to the article Bill (Camp Lazlo)

I redirected it because I thought it was unneccessary. He's just a minor character, he doesn't need an article. Squirepants101 22:50, 25 September 2006 (UTC)

But there are articles squirrel scouts minor charcters who have articles and Your every selfish,User:Squirepants101 this is User:Kongsaurus12

I'm going to warn you about personal attacks like that (calling me selfish, that's an insult). And I agree that some shows have articles about minor characters such as Fred Fredburger (used to be one, but now is recurring), but that's because he's extremely popular (and maybe because the list of characters article was getting too large). Keeper of the Reaper and Be A-Fred, Be Very A-Fred revealed a lot about him, however some of the Bean Scouts are different stories. Not much has been revealed about them, so they wouldn't need their own article when their summaries are only a sentence long. P.S. I did not create those articles about Gretchen, Patsy, and Nina. Someone else did. Squirepants101 22:11, 26 September 2006 (UTC)

Sorry about that But I'm Making a new article about Bill and please do not redirect it

If you're going to ask, I did not redirect your article (Bill (Camp Kidney). Someone else did and tagged it for speedy deletion. They redirected it because you were creating a fork. Bill still does not need his own article. He barely does anything on Camp Lazlo. If you created an article of that, it would be like creating an article for every minor character in Camp Lazlo. If you did that, what would be the point of the minor character list. Squirepants101 22:41, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

It's it true that Bill's the aardvark?-User:Kongsaurus12

[edit] Protected

I've noticed that this article has been protected, so lets discuss our disputes. I've noticed that some users have been creating unnecessary articles (even a copy of this page which I redirected). I do not think they're neccessary because all that info can fit right here. I've also seen users adding fake info to the Squirrel Scouts, like fake voice actors. Any comments? Squirepants101 23:01, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

That's true. Some characters' names are never mentioned or yet to be mentioned. So, no people should add info you're not sure. Also, some people added info that is not true. That's not right! That is the cause of the protection of the site!! Stop it!! --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 00:21, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

I've unprotected this article, please bring up disputed items here on the talk page. — xaosflux Talk 23:09, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

Although this article is now unprotected, I've noticed another thing: the main articles of the characters. I think we should keep some of them (such as main characters and maybe some of the reccurring), but I think we should redirect those articles about the Squirrel Scouts. Squirepants101 23:19, 29 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Pictures

We need pictures of Samson, Dave, Ping Pong, Edward, Dung bettles, Lemmings, Slinkman, and the rest of the bean scouts. We got pictures of the squirrel scouts. Why not? ~LongBay~

LongBay. Which pics present the squirrel scouts? Joanna

Mainly, it's easy to acquire the pictures (I can do them myself but I wouldn't do it currently).--esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 15:51, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

Esanchez7587. Which Squirrel Scouts do the pics present? Joanna

Thanks for the Lemming and Sampson pictures. We still need pictures for Slinkman, Edward, Chup & Skip, Dave, Ping Pong, and the other bean scouts ~LongBay~ We need pictres of Slinkman, Beetles, Edward, and the Bean Scots

We need Pics Slinkman, Edward, Chip&Skip, and the other Bean Scouts!!

We will find the rest colav10.[1]


[edit] Peer Review

[edit] List of characters in Camp Lazlo

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Squirepants101 21:39, 3 October 2006 (UTC)

I added a Slinkman article it needs more information. Expand the article. ~LongBay~

I rediected it. I think it's enough main articles of the characters (for now). Squirepants101 12:04, 4 October 2006 (UTC)

We need a Slinkman article. We got an article for Amber, Patsy and the squirrel scouts. They dont appear as much as Slinkman does.

[edit] Confused...

I remember that a long time ago, I was able to tell the Squirrel Scouts. Now, in Wiki here, it got me confused but for sure, the info on Susie is completely incorrect!! I can't remember who was Susie but it wasn't that character mentioned already! I think it was the dog...someone help! Any episode, check the credits! Mianly maybe on Dosey Doe... --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 01:59, 7 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Almondine

We need a new picture of Almondine we cant really see her. ~LongBay~

LongBay. Find this pic at www.toonarific.com. OK? Joanna

[edit] Names of Bean Scouts

I removed the names of Bean Scouts who are minor characters,expect for Milt.They're names were revealed never what scout they are.So I gave them the name of animal they are.Ex:Walrus Scout,Strok Scout,and Aardvark scout.-User:Kongsaurus12

[edit] Redirected another page

Today, I redirected another page about a minor camper and it was Honey. She had her own article under a different name and I redirected it here, but the person who created that article created another article about Honey. I redirected that one. Why are users creating these kinds of articles anyways when all that information can go right here? Especially when they are only a few sentences long. This article isn't even 30 kilobytes (it used to be big until someone removed all the minor characters, not campers. I created an article for those minor characters). Squirepants101 00:06, 2 October 2006 (UTC) Hey there, Squirepants101! What's the Poodle Scout's name?

That's very irrelevant to the discussion here and why are you asking me that when the Squirrel Scouts don't appear often. Check the credits for the names of the Squirrel Scouts. Squirepants101 21:45, 2 October 2006 (UTC)

Hey! I know! Suzie is The Poodle scout. Joanna

[edit] Chef McMuesli

Is Chef McMuesli's nickname "Wheatgrass Willie"?.User:Kongsaurus12.

[edit] New articles about other Camp Lazlo characters

Can I create a lot of articles about other Camp Lazlo characters? Joanna

like who?67.175.138.202 03:04, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

Actually, only the main and recurring characters can have articles, which are:

  • Lazlo
  • Raj
  • Clam
  • Lumpus
  • Edward
  • Samson
  • Patsy
  • Nina
  • Gretchen

Because a lot were mentioned about them. The others, not much. Unless you give a reasoning why they need a whole article, after a small problem with another user. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 03:12, 15 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] List of the Squirrel Scouts

There are ten female campers from Acorn Flats:

  • Patsy
  • Nina
  • Gretchen
  • Honey
  • Amber
  • Toodie
  • Terrifield
  • Almondine
  • Suzie
  • Misty

In reality, I don't think that's a correct list. I mean, "Terrefield", "Suzie", & "Misty". I don't think they're mentioned (except Susie, but I think the article mentions it to the wrong character. I'll take a look at an episode to confirm it) --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 06:44, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

The last Squirrel Scout's name is Misty. Joanna no its not its michelle. georgina

[edit] Camper's Names

I know! Three Bean Scouts' names are: David (the muskrat), Kickpatrick (the cat) and Joey (the toucan). Joanna —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Yoko7890 (talkcontribs) 15:48, 30 December 2006 (UTC).

How do you know?67.175.138.202 05:16, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

Those names are untrue. Don't believe it. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 05:17, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Number of Bean Scouts?

  • One epsiode of "Camp Lazlo" Slinkman reports to Lumpus that there are 14 Bean scouts. However there are 24 named Bean Scouts on article page. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 134.53.145.90 (talk) 01:57, 12 February 2007 (UTC).

[edit]  ???

I found the words "werdo" on the bottom of the page! What's going on here? It like a two-year-old got on here and messed things up.

[edit] Images

Some of the images of the characters are sideways what is up with that.Bladez636

The person who got the pictures didn't do a well job. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:54, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] We don't need them

I'm curious, I don't think the extra links to the other characters (mostly the "other Squirrel Scouts"). They don't have much importance and the info doesn't provide enough info to have an article of their own. I don't think we need thos extra articles. --esanchez, Camp Lazlo fan! 23:54, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Maybe you're right. Those "other" Squirrel Scouts aren't as notable as those three who are more commonly seen and perhaps don't need main articles.

Tell you what. Sometimes I kinda like some of those other Squirrel Scouts. Sometimes I even imagined of episodes where they would have a lot of the limelight. I even think of the perceptions of mine to make on tube.

[edit] Removal of the clean-up tag? / Some concerns

This article was tagged a year ago because it was "chock-full of vandalism" and that it was "thrown together by a 2nd grader in 5 minutes" (The page in March 2006). I think it's been improved a lot since then (The page half a year later), but I have some concerns for this article: This article has gone through a lot of change since January 2007, but much of the change has ocurred in March, coincidentally a year after the article was tagged for cleanup. I'm not sure whether this major change is beneficial to the article or not (the change was not discussed on Talk:List of characters in Camp Lazlo), but I am sure that there are too many daughter articles because even some of the minor characters are starting to have them. Most of the articles are stubs and some of them feel fancrufty to me. Is there anything I could to do improve the article? That is what I was going to put on WP:RFF, but I realized that I needed to make a major edit onto this article. Another concern I have for the article is the names of the campers. Some users have been making unverifiable changes to the names (examples: [2]). The worst part of that is that many of the editors who do this don't provide where they get the names from in the edit summary (there are other uses for the edit summary, which include asking the question, "Why did you make this edit?"). Much of this article and some of its daughter articles are written in an in-universe style. The images don't have fair use rationales. The references have been removed. By the way, here's an updated peer review:

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  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
    • apparently
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[3]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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Please share your suggestions on how to improve the article. Squirepants101 20:28, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Yeah, I can see some of the concerns. There are too many main articles being made, especially since there isn't much info about many of the characters. Before, the article was very lengthy, between having two articles for some of the characters, and that the list went forever. I only moved the ones that had main articles, mainly for the usual characters. The smaller ones, like the once in awhile characters, don't seem to need a main article. I would say the very minor characters should have their own area on this page, with just small info, or maybe not even have them at all. They're so minor, articles might not even be needed. Black Kat 14:11, 25 March 2007 (UTC)