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A nice start, though I think it goes without saying that the main body needs expansion as more information becomes available. The introduction, however, needs to include just a bit more context. "LAND 125 Soldier Combat System is designed to..." doesn't answer the question "What is Land 125?" The intro, I think, should probably read something more like "LAND 125 Soldier Combat System refers collectively to a set of communications equipment, weaponry, armour, field pack and other equipment which is currently being planned and phased in by the Australian military. It is designed to..." LordAmeth 11:05, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

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Talk:Land 125

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