Talk:Kisschasy

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[edit] POV Issues

Whoever wrote this article is joking themselves. It's not a biography, as much as a piece of nonsense with no use to anyone. Bassbill 06:42, 21 October 2006 (UTC)

I don't see how is is nonsense. It is quite factual and I find it useful myself. Pretty much everything here is verifiable. If you know more, why don't you or why haven't you changed it yourself? Kit_Fallapart 21:15, 06 November 2006
This article sounds like it belongs in a music magazine not wikipedia. --210.49.245.236 14:04, 10 January 2007 (UTC)A
This article is just advertisement and does not belong in Wikipedia 72.181.3.84 01:19, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
I agree that this article could do with some revision - not so much in its content but its presentation and prose. Trioj85 04:29, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

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I've gone through the article and re-edited it to remove any POV and unencyclopedic phrasing and believe it is almost fine now. As far as I can see, it just needs independent sources for the ARIA nomination and going gold in Australia. I also introduced internal links in as many places as seemed appropriate.The Kinslayer 10:57, 16 March 2007 (UTC)
OK, now the award nominations and gold status have been sourced and I can see no other issues with this article now. The Kinslayer 21:50, 16 March 2007 (UTC)