Talk:Kaminia (Piraeus), Greece

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[edit] Article Merger & Rewrite

Hi. I am the one that wrote about the Koutsothanasis bakery. This is definitely not a promotion. We still own the bakery, but we rent it out because we live in New York now. I believe it should be included because Kaminia would be nothing without its people and businesses. Please reconsider allowing this to be in the article.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.215.136.48 (talk • contribs).

This article should definately be merged with the article about the town Piraeus. It is an article about a neighborhood within that town. Additionally, this article demands a rewrite. It is very badly written and certainly not of encyclopedic quality. It is obviously a personalized entry... And even though the author of this article was obviously struck by the quality of the bread from the local bakery, I am not sure that opinion is warranted in here...

I should note that upon further reading, it seems that part of the article is largely an advertisement or promotion. It is possible that mention of the Greek bakery is OK for inclusion, minus the personal remarks. And as for the "car audio" group - whatever that means, I am not sure - that may be OK for inclusion as well. However, the personalization of this portion requires removal...

But as for the merger of the article with that of Piraeus, it seems to be entirely appropriate as a component of that article... Stevenmitchell 11:43, 18 November 2006 (UTC)