Talk:Joseph Todaro, Sr.

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This is much better. It states the facts that can be verified and nothing more. Little Joe Shots certainly knew of a lot more but for the sake of being encyclopedic this is exactly what we need. Good work, Alexbonaro 04:24, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Tone of Article

Once again the article has an informal tone. The worst example being "Centro Anni!" at the end of the article - a salutation of Todaro's successful career. The article must give up facts if they can not be cited - unfortunately it just doesn't seem like this article can have all of the information Little Joe knows about Todaro without getting sources for all those statements and receiving a major cleanup. Sorry Little Joe, you know far more than the rest of us but Wikipedia has these guidelines. Alexbonaro 23:44, 28 January 2007 (UTC)