Talk:Jones Soda

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I did a total overhaul of the article for about 6 hours today. It's my first major edit, so let me know what you think. I've got a bit more to add, but I just can't stand staring at it any more today. Let me know what I left out and I'll try to research it some more. I know the stuff on Energy and WhoopAss is weak, but I'm having trouble finding info on it. I'm going to try to contact Jones for additional information.

Gh057rider 20:33, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

Add paragraph about jones natural

Good Job Kyle!

Dropitnucka 18:45, 23 February 2006 (UTC)Jamie

Slippyd 04:57, 11 March 2006 (UTC) Cub Foods should be added in to the list of stores that carry Jones; they had it before Target; I remember getting it from Cub in 2002.

1 Candy
2 Enjoy the fine taste of Jones Soda!
3 List of all flavors
4 financial success?
5 Added To Softdrink Thingy

[edit] Candy

Anyone else in favor of adding a picture - and more content - to the candy? 68.211.24.94 07:39, 19 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Enjoy the fine taste of Jones Soda!

OK, look, this may be a cool drink and all but a few sentences here and there read like a commercial.

Some examples of wording one doesn't usually see in product descriptions on Wikipedia can be seen below. My intention is NOT to question any factual accuracy in these statements, but rather to illustrate how the wording sounds more like a brochure than an encyclopedia entry:

"The Jones Soda is a carbonated soft drink that has many unusual flavors that no other soft drink can offer. The bottles not only come with a different picture on each label but also words of wisdom under the caps."

"While some of these can be considered quite odd, it represents the originality that JSC has always stood for, and keeps its customers coming back."

Quit complaining. Its very true. Maybe if you tried a jones soda you would know that it is really neat and special. Ekulwyo 05:51, 5 July 2006 (UTC)

Needs to be re-worded. I love Jones, but they are not above wikipedia's rules.. 68.211.24.94 07:38, 19 September 2006 (UTC)

[edit] List of all flavors

Could someone come up with a list of all the flavors? It would be appreciated and seems like the kind of thing this article needs. Right now it's mostly about it's kooky thanksgiving sodas. Andrew zot 03:28, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

[edit] financial success?

Aside from stating that the Thanksgiving line repeatedly sold out quickly, it isn't mentioned whether or not Jones soda has been successful over-all. This seems like something that would be a key point to the article.